From the editor: In a story that might have found itself on the cutting room floor of high school journalism classes across the country for want of the "who, what, where and how" usually critical to news stories as opposed to the "what if?" and "could have" the account utilized, Juan Montoya of the "El Rrun Rrun" blog, presented an account that raised more questions than it answered. With the foundation of "word has spread" Juan reported the disturbing three hour long sexual assault of a BISD bus driver. But, as Juan wove the story, he inserted conflict, at first stating that the victim told law enforcement that her attacker had been paid to assault her, then supplementing that with "we find" that law enforcement types frequently attribute such a report to a "relationship gone sour."
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What is Juan insinuating? Is this story a preemptive strike for a politico who anticipates a forthcoming, actual news story? Sometimes the story behind the story is worth telling. The field of subsidized "news" stories is filled with hazards, but no one negotiates that field better than Montoya.
The story Juan runs with eerily resembles one that I heard last night, but could not verify. This "fledgling newshound," as Juan described me a couple days ago, simply could not run this story as presented. Below is the "El Rrun Rrun" account, warts and all:
Was There or Wasn't There an Assault for Pay?
By Juan Montoya
By now the word has spread throughout the city and the Brownsville Independent School District that a female bus driver reported to the Cameron County Sheriff's Department that she was physically and sexually assaulted over the course of about three hours at her apartment Sunday night before the aggressor left.
But apparently, she also told deputies that before the attacker left, he told her that someone had paid him to assault her and "very well."
We, of course, have no way of knowing whether that is exactly what happened, but the suspicion that someone had paid the attacker money to inflict the horrendous act upon ny woman would be cause enought o recoil at the crime.
To think that there was a political motive for the attack is nothing short of heinous.
But now we find that some law enforcement types have expressed some skepticism about the woman's report and say that frequently in some cases where the victim and attacker have a standing relationship that goes sour, reports like these are often the result.
As we said, we have no way of knowing what actually happened. Lest someone criticize us for doubting the woman's story, let us say out front that we condemn the crime – if it actually occurred – in the strongest terms.
But in speaking with acquaintacnes of the complaintant, we are led to think that there may be other factors working here. Perhaps the complaint was the result of acute embarrassment at a relationship and tryst gone bad, or some other purely personal motive. Or perhaps the evening degenerated into something not envisioned by either actor in the occurrence.
If indeed the sexual and physical assault did transgress over the span of three hours, then we're sure that the investigators will have plenty of evidence left over at the scene to determine the identity, if not the motives, of the assailant.
In either case, an assault is nothing we wish upon anybody, sexual or otherwise. Hopefully, the county investigators will get to the bottom of this to dispel any suspicion that a political motivation drove the alleged attack.
So why the hell are you reprinting the story?
ReplyDeleteLOL! The ambiguity, innuendo and second guessing of Juan's story is an essential part of my story. Were I not to include his actual story, my commentary makes no sense. Kapeesh?
DeleteJim
So what are you doing Jim? Are you making light of an assault? What the hell is wrong with your head. Violence should never be sugar coated you fool!
DeleteI can't be faulted for your lack of reading comprehension.
DeleteJim
Being a bit defensive there, bro. Perhaps excerpts in quotes may have appeared more journalistic. Reprinting the whole story is a cheap way to "plump up your page". However, I must admit, you got us anony posters to break stride.
DeletePeace
Question: does comprehension come before or after communication?
DeleteWas the attacker paid "very well" or was he hired to sexually assault her "very well"??? We may never know. Did she allow him into her home? She obviously knew him. Did he not satisfy her...which caused her to call the cops?
ReplyDeleteA woman unsatified is a woman scorned.
Juan "El Arrastrado" Montoya practices Alarma! journalism. He gets tidbits of info and fashions a story with it, forgetting the idea that readers want the entire story and not rumor. But he's strictly 14th Street cantina material, an under-achiever who found the only town in the world where he could buffalo people. It's pretty pathetic. The less you associate your blog with his the better off you'll be, Jim.
ReplyDeleteJuan Cortina
Montoya is a Naco, plain and simple. Just look at him. Only fits in at a cantina. And then he likely mooches brews. Vato perdido. No credibility.
Delete- Meliton Garza
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Mr. Cortina,
DeleteI like Juan, but he took an unprovoked shot at me and I gently reciprocated. No biggie. We are at different stages of life. Juan is writing for money and has to defer and cater to his benefactors. I write when I wish, what I wish for no money. At some point Juan tired of my criticism of Quintanilla and Presas-Garcia and attempted to undermine my credibility. It was a feeble, unsuccessful effort not dissimilar to the hilarious, yet libelous attempts by Carlos Quintanilla to discredit me.
Juan may have set the tone for his future relationship to this blog, but at the very least he knows that I read what he writes and will respond in kind.
Jim
Juan "El Riff Raff" Montoya is bad news. He's 14th Street material and nothing more, a problem for the community.
DeleteI am follower of both MMM and ERR blogs and believe both of you guys shuould go out and have a beer or two and kiss and make up for both of you two have been doing a fantastic job of exposing all that is corrupt in our area. Quit this getting on each others skin and give us some more of the great writing stuff.
ReplyDeleteNo, don't do it, Jim. Montoya is soiled. Why run with him when you absolutely do not have to. That's the difference between both blogs. Why lower yourself? Juan Montoya should care for his children and not just let the government do it!
DeleteI'm cool with Juan. He decided to take a shot. I responded.
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